Year 5 Adair & Guest

Here are some kids’ sites from around the world that are looking for feedback from other kids. Use your school email address and your secret internet name. You can use our class blog address or the school web address if you need to leave a website address.

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http://web.me.com/jarrod.lamshed/Boys_Class/Welcome/Welcome.html

http://moturoa.blogspot.com/

http://grantclg.edublogs.org

http://teachers.saschina.org/shossack/2009/09/02/214/

http://blogs.micds.org/rbs4th/

Thanks everyone,

Mrs G

From Monday the 17th to Friday the 21st of august Jenny came to our class room for teacher experince. If anyone would like to leave a comment u r sure welcome. Then we can show her all the comments the next time she comes. I hope everyone enjoyed having her here in our class. Jenny did quite a few activities like hip hop helping and lots more. From bond 919.

I walked slowly into the darkness I heard voices coming from the rock pool under the cave. I thought I was dreaming when I saw a … mermaid.

The next morning I woke up on my bed. I thought about what happened last night, was it just a dream? I didn’t remember getting back in bed. ‘’Anne get down here! ‘’ my mom called. I went down stairs to see my mum holding a piece of paper with my name on it.

‘’Anne you have taken this test 3 times now and you have failed again’’ Mum said.

It’s too hard to pass the test. The questions don’t make any sense! I replied. Mum didn’t like me arguing with her so she said that if I don’t pass this test I’m grounded for a month.

At school I met up with my friend Monica. Monica was always got great test results. My greatest was a d- which I think is pretty good for a 13 teen year old.

Our teacher Mr. Martian had the horrible habit of giving us assignments every 2 weeks. Mr. Martian is my mom’s favorite teacher. ‘‘Good morning class as you all knows last week’s topic was to make a volcano, some did well and others didn’t “Mr. Martian said looking at me. Our next assignment will be to write an article about your greatest adventure yet.

After school I started thinking about my greatest adventure yet. I had nothing I couldn’t think of anything. “What about the time we went to the zoo and the panda ate your cookie” Mom said. “That was when I was four” I replied. That night I went back to the rock pool it had a magical mystical feeling about it. I was think if I saw a real mermaid. Then the rock pools water started bubbling.  Bubbles started rising from the water. Then I really could see a mermaid. The mermaid had rainbow scales and colorful sea shells in her hair.

“Who are you?” I asked

“I’m Shelly I’m a mermaid”

“My mom owns this cave and the rock pool” I said

Over the weeks Shelly and I became good friends. One day I went to meat Shelly like I promised but she wasn’t there.

I stood there waiting for her but she didn’t come then I accidentally fell into the rock pool. I didn’t sink though I grew a tail and turned in to mermaid. I swam into a small cave in the rock pool that led to a river. I was wondering how to get back to land when I heard a voice screaming for help. I followed the mermaid’s voice. Then I came to find the mermaid yelling help was actually Shelly.

Shelly was caught in a net. Shelly told me she was trying to swimming with a dolphin when she got caught in a net. I recognized that the net came from a boat and the back of the boat had my dad’s company logo on it. I found my back to land and got out of the water then I turned back into a human. I ran back home and saw my mum preparing dinner. “Hi Anne would you like to watch a movie?” She said. “No thanks I replied I have to call dad”. I went and called dad. “Hi sweetie” He said. “Dad I need you to stop your boat that’s fishing near our house”. “But why?”

I was about to tell dad that a mermaid got stuck in the boats net but he wouldn’t believe me. I told dad that one of my friends was swimming and her necklace got stuck in the net. Dad stopped the net. I ran back to the rock pool I turned back into a mermaid. I went and saved Shelly. Shelly was so happy, she thought she would die. Shelly told me that I turned into a mermaid when I went into the rock pools water because the water was magic and only people with mermaid DNA could turn into a mermaid. She also told me that my great grandmother was a mermaid. Shelly asked me to keep her a secret I agreed but she said it was okay to write about her.

It was the day we had to hand in “My greatest adventure yet”. I wrote about Shelly. Mr. Martian said it was a great story but not true so I got a B+. I continued having fun adventures with Shelly.

Now I’m older and I write award winning children’s books. I call them “ My great adventures’’.

Hi everyone

i made a new blog called  www.thundergirl.edublogs.org if you have any time or you get bored please visit my new blog.

thanks hsm16

The website is www.funwithroxy.edublogs.org

Thanks

Hi everyone, I’m just letting you all know that I have made a new blog. It is for girls and boys (not just girls). I hope that you have sometime to go on it and please leave me lots of comments. My website for it is : www.funwithroxy.edubogs.org             Have fun on it!!!

Hi guys

I was just wondering if you guys liked wally because I just loved him. I was just  wondering who liked which part like the bommerang,fish,digiredo and that.

So yeah bye guys from Bond919