Year 5 Adair & Guest

Here are some kids’ sites from around the world that are looking for feedback from other kids. Use your school email address and your secret internet name. You can use our class blog address or the school web address if you need to leave a website address.

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http://web.me.com/jarrod.lamshed/Boys_Class/Welcome/Welcome.html

http://moturoa.blogspot.com/

http://grantclg.edublogs.org

http://teachers.saschina.org/shossack/2009/09/02/214/

http://blogs.micds.org/rbs4th/

Thanks everyone,

Mrs G

One day I was on my way home and I saw a puppy. It had one leg missing. I looked at it for a minute. But then I herd a noise. It was coming closer. I didn’t know what to do. I saw a car coming. I ran as fast as I could to get the puppy. I grabbed it we both got out of the way and the car went straight past us. Phew I shouted.

I ran home as fast as I could. I went straight into my bedroom put the puppy down and whispered I did it I actually did it.

Oh no I can hear footsteps. Where’s a box? I looked every where.

Then I said why do I have to do this. I grabbed my old dolls and put them on the floor i put the puppy in the box that the dolls where in.

Then someone opened the door. I screamed don’t ask me why.

It was my Dad he said were going to the city tomorrow. He said to get dressed straight away in the morning.

That night I got left overs from dinner. Toke the puppy out and gave him food

The next morning I woke up got dressed, cleaned, my teeth, had breakfast and brushed my hair.

I went up stairs to see the puppy I picked him up. But there was something strange about him. He was white and he was squishy. I figured out it was my favourite soft toy dog.

I started to cry.

1 hour later

So we went to the city that morning I asked if we could go to the pet shop and we did.

The pet lady said to do all this stuff so I did. Then the next day I saw Bart (puppy). I couldn’t believe it. I ran up the stairs with him. But then my Dad saw me I put the puppy behind my back and said Dad I need to tell you something. I told him everything I asked if I could keep Bart (puppy) and he said yes.

Bart (puppy) and I were best friends for ever from that day on.

The End  

From Monday the 17th to Friday the 21st of august Jenny came to our class room for teacher experince. If anyone would like to leave a comment u r sure welcome. Then we can show her all the comments the next time she comes. I hope everyone enjoyed having her here in our class. Jenny did quite a few activities like hip hop helping and lots more. From bond 919.

Hi everyone

i made a new blog called  www.thundergirl.edublogs.org if you have any time or you get bored please visit my new blog.

thanks hsm16

The website is www.funwithroxy.edublogs.org

Thanks

Hi everyone, I’m just letting you all know that I have made a new blog. It is for girls and boys (not just girls). I hope that you have sometime to go on it and please leave me lots of comments. My website for it is : www.funwithroxy.edubogs.org             Have fun on it!!!

I have a new blog called www.kitkatfun.edublogs.org I hope you go and have a look

1. To be kind and generous to people.
2. Determination will get you anything you want to achieve.
3. To look after your family because they will always be there for you. 
4. To be greatful for what you get. 
5. Cherish the people you love because they might not be around for very long.