Year 5 Adair & Guest

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Thanks everyone,

Mrs G

When I walked into the kitchen I saw a door it had all cobwebs around it and it looked like it hadn’t been opened in years.

I asked my best friend crayon (who is a mouse) “should I go in or not” he said “ok” but you have to go with me, “fine” so they went down the hallway as scared as ever. Then………….a loud noise came from behind the door.

In a wink of and eye they ran back down the hallway the entrance door shut and locked them in, what will they do?

They were screaming and banging on the door “HELP, HELP, BANG, BANG” “help us we are trapped” they yelled. The noise got louder and louder. “PLEASE HELP” they kept on yelling and screaming and banging and knocking but no one was answering they were really getting worried.

Then……………the noise got really loud so they opened the door and…………………. They were so surprised it was just a mouse and it happened to crayons aunties sisters best friends sisters uncle so that was a co-incidence so they had no problem meeting each other.

That night she kept on screaming then someone came and really scared them yes they’re saved.

She was so glad that someone finally found them so she didn’t have to live in that hallway.

When she got into her bed that night she had a really bad dream that she never got out of that hallway and she never got found it was horrible.

The next morning she decided to get a lock to go on it so no one can get in, she thought it was a great idea she went out side grabbed the key and buried it in the back yard so deep that no one will ever fine it.

16 years later

I came back curious not sure if I should go in.

I disguised myself pretending to be a work man I rang the door bell. The new lady answered the I told her that I wanted to put a wall up “yes” she said happily so I quickly put the wall up and ran out side I dug up the key it was still there so I reburied the key and ran out the house I yelled out “THANKYOU” I tripped but I got back up I ran as fast as I could.

Finally I got to my house I told my mum about every thing I was so scared.

I TOLD MYSELF I WOULD NEVER GO BACK AGIN!!

THE END

TO BE CONTINUED

From Monday the 17th to Friday the 21st of august Jenny came to our class room for teacher experince. If anyone would like to leave a comment u r sure welcome. Then we can show her all the comments the next time she comes. I hope everyone enjoyed having her here in our class. Jenny did quite a few activities like hip hop helping and lots more. From bond 919.

Hi everyone

i made a new blog called  www.thundergirl.edublogs.org if you have any time or you get bored please visit my new blog.

thanks hsm16

The website is www.funwithroxy.edublogs.org

Thanks

Hi everyone, I’m just letting you all know that I have made a new blog. It is for girls and boys (not just girls). I hope that you have sometime to go on it and please leave me lots of comments. My website for it is : www.funwithroxy.edubogs.org             Have fun on it!!!

1. never drink coke and mentos at the same time

2. never wear a dress without wearing any underpants and do a cartweel.

3. never eat ice-cream when on a plane

4. never talk to your mother when  she is in a bad mood.

5.nevr eat paper

Hi guys

I was just wondering if you guys liked wally because I just loved him. I was just  wondering who liked which part like the bommerang,fish,digiredo and that.

So yeah bye guys from Bond919