Year 5 Adair & Guest

Here are some kids’ sites from around the world that are looking for feedback from other kids. Use your school email address and your secret internet name. You can use our class blog address or the school web address if you need to leave a website address.

Remember how exciting it feels when you see that someone has commented on your post? Make someone’s day and leave them some positive feedback – say WHY you like something.

http://web.me.com/jarrod.lamshed/Boys_Class/Welcome/Welcome.html

http://moturoa.blogspot.com/

http://grantclg.edublogs.org

http://teachers.saschina.org/shossack/2009/09/02/214/

http://blogs.micds.org/rbs4th/

Thanks everyone,

Mrs G

From Monday the 17th to Friday the 21st of august Jenny came to our class room for teacher experince. If anyone would like to leave a comment u r sure welcome. Then we can show her all the comments the next time she comes. I hope everyone enjoyed having her here in our class. Jenny did quite a few activities like hip hop helping and lots more. From bond 919.

SHOE AHEAD!

I opened the door to see millions of pairs of shoes. Then I saw the black spotted shoes with a light shining above. OMG I saw them and stared.

Ahhh…. “They’re so beautiful!” cried Lauren. Then she saw someone on the other side. It was Laura saying the same thing. I stared. The bell rang which means 5 minutes left and the mall gate will shut.

So Lauren and Laura both charged to get the shoes. I won WOOOHOO! Then I finally found the box to put the shoes in. With three minutes left to go. I ran to the counter and brought the shoes.

I got the shoes in the bag and ran to the gate. It was closing. So I ran even faster. But I was too late. I didn’t get through. It was just me; yes just me with the black spotted shoes.

“Thank god that I got my phone back today, I can call someone.” said Lauren. She grabbed her phone and then heard something behind her. It was Laura! With the pink spotted shoes.

I screamed in fright. Then pulled out my phone, to call someone. There was no reception. I walked down the corridor. No reception. I started to cry. Then something fell on my head. BANG and I was out, lying on the floor. When I woke up I was laying on a bed with faces staring at me. I blink to make sure I wasn’t dreaming. But I wasn’t, it was real. I ask about the shoes.

They said what shoes? I say the black spotted shoes. “Oh those shoes,” said the doctor. I think a girl called Laura took them. “WHY DID YOU LET HER?” screamed Lauren. Then Laura walked in, she was wearing MY black spotted shoes.

“Give me back those shoes!” screamed Lauren. I took my sheets off, pushed my dad over and ran to get my shoes.

I chased Laura down the corridor.  She couldn’t run because of the black spotted shoes. I caught her and tripped her. “Yes I finally get to wear these shoes. SO I wore them back to the doctor’s room, to say that I’m fine and can I go home.

When I got home I turned on the T.V sat on the couch and fell asleep.

The next morning I went to the mall, to see how I was knocked out.

When I got there I realized that there was a hole in the roof.

When I looked up, I saw an advertisement saying about sun glasses. So I rushed into the shop to see the white huge Sunnies. But that’s another story to tell.

THE END

Hi everyone

i made a new blog called  www.thundergirl.edublogs.org if you have any time or you get bored please visit my new blog.

thanks hsm16

The website is www.funwithroxy.edublogs.org

Thanks

Hi everyone, I’m just letting you all know that I have made a new blog. It is for girls and boys (not just girls). I hope that you have sometime to go on it and please leave me lots of comments. My website for it is : www.funwithroxy.edubogs.org             Have fun on it!!!

Hi guys

I was just wondering if you guys liked wally because I just loved him. I was just  wondering who liked which part like the bommerang,fish,digiredo and that.

So yeah bye guys from Bond919

Hi guys its Bond919 here

Well done on all of your cars that you guys made. I thought that the races were just FANTASTIC.

Well done who ever one. (Mrs G says, : It was “Crystal”)

So yeah Bye